Saturday, March 26, 2011

week 3... journal writer

Dear Diary,
i awoke to strange silence.... As i waited in the lobby for real estate agent to arrive the door man who introduced himself as Jeff, got up from his station he talked to me like i was the only one. when Ann arrived i still didn't get my goal weight... Even thou i worked hard. she saw in my diary You are a fat ugly dyke written all over it. It made me smile just thinking about the expression on her face.........
Love ,Portia

3 comments:

  1. jelly.. i really like how you portraided this person you really did a good job.. i feel like i was in the book went i read this. good job!

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  2. thia book sounds intresting i really like how you captujred the attention of the reader and i agree with alicia the way you protrayed it makes me feel as though i have been reading this book you capture jsut enough importance for me to understand what the book is about

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  3. i hate how she always puts her self down. It's very obvious that she has a very big eating disorder if she thinks she's fat. In the book it said that she ends up weighing like 89 pounds, and that's crazy!!

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